| Cloud Burst
2004-09-08
ch 1, signed What Could've Been
Cloud Burst
2004-09-08
ch 1, signed | so vivid, great poem!! | Time
ShadowPharoh
2005-03-24
ch 1, signed | really really good poem. i enjoyed it. great poem, greater poet. SP | dustytiger
2005-03-20
ch 1, signed | great work, i enjoyed it a lot, thank you for the review | Heartless
caliorbust
2005-06-08
ch 1, signed | That was really good! I love it! caliorbust | Mike Smale
2005-02-20
ch 1, signed | Very powerful poem, so true as well, in both a literal and symbolic matter like an allegory. Keep up the excellent work! | lunasilverstar
2004-11-29
ch 1, signed | very good. i can practically hear someone speaking the words. | Wires
| The Disreputable Girl
2005-02-22
ch 1, signed Do Not Give It Away | Manuel Fajar
2005-02-20
ch 1, signed | velvet warm kisses, scented soft—apple blossoms,— fugacious and sweet. — ¿you've found someone else? good for you—winning lotto,— didn't do your math. — i'm still singing songs, everyday my voice grows strong, even though you've left. — you thought with one kiss, you'd entrap my foolish heart, ¿what am i,—a fool? — | LiKePiNk
2005-02-19
ch 1, signed | Interesting poem. I liked it a lot. ~LP~ | Fake Blue Ink
2005-02-19
ch 1, signed | excellent use of vocabulary. much thought put into this poem, definitely. | Broken Baby Doll Boy
sparklebaby319
2005-04-10
ch1, anon. | hey that is great, and deep. keep up the great writing | Flower of the Dragon
2005-04-04
ch 1, signed | Wow, that sounds so simple, yet it has an underlying meaning, like thing. I really like that simple yet awesomeness of it. | your guilty pleasure
2005-03-23
ch 1, signed | very dramatic and dark. I like it alot. oh and I read ur profile- I saw the books u like (anne rice so rules! lol) I thought u might wanna check out an author named Laurell K Hamilton and her Anita Blake Vampire Hunter series- she's an amazing writer^^ well good poem^^ have a good day^^ | EbonicCinderella
2005-03-21
ch 1, signed | The purity is the blood not spilt...Ph I love that line! | stained-in-ink
2005-03-09
ch 1, signed | Thanks for the review, first of all. This made my day. . . really good. | | The Disreputable Girl
2005-02-22
ch 1, signed Unkind
johnyelling johnyelling@yahoo.com
2005-04-12
ch1, anon. | God, I wish I had your talent for words! | Flower of the Dragon
2005-04-06
ch 1, signed | That is different from the rest of your work, this one has more of a classic feeling. It's a good change for you. I like it, a lot. | | this made me smile. | niceeffective. | For Shame
cOnfuzed-pOet
2005-04-10
ch 1, signed | Intresting poem. Very weird way of thinking, maybe only to me, but I still like this! Nice. Ohh an thanks for the review. Hope you read more of my stuff! cOnfuzed-pOet | | Flower of the Dragon
2005-04-06
ch 1, signed Stray
johnyelling johnyelling@yahoo.com
2005-04-12
ch1, anon. | I got alot from reading this, I think it is very good and thought provoking | listhela
2005-04-10
ch 1, signed | "echoi am worried about your fading" it's a time of reversal contrastion and contradictions lovely | Free
ShadowPharoh
2005-05-03
ch 1, signed | this was fantastic! simply spectacular! i luvved it! SP | Unholy Haven
2005-05-01
ch 1, signed | I agree, it's perfectly freaky! Good work on this! | Faithless Juliet
2005-05-01
ch 1, signed | Beautiful detail and imagry, I truly enjoyed this piece. Congradulations on your publication in Teen Ink, I was published in one of their magazines a couple of years ago. I got a cute pen to. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. | Painful Bliss | Flower of the Dragon
2005-06-12
ch 1, signed | oh, that is dark, but i like that. its like an angsty romance thing. i LUVS it! | ShadowPharoh
2005-06-08
ch 1, signed | i liked this one. great job! SP | Strangerwithnoface
2005-06-08
ch 1, signed | Hm, great poem, I loved the imagery that was portrayed... and the titled, heh, a paradox, none-the-less. ^_~ ~Vlad | caliorbust
2005-06-08
ch 1, signed | That is soo good! I am so putting it in my favorites. caliorbust | Wow, you should really be proud of yourself for that one. That's amazing, really. | | so vivid, great poem!! |
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